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my name is guilherme,I live in Campo Magro,It's close of Curitiba. I study in two schools one if call Zardo and the other Microcamp.I wake up at seven a'clock to go to school,but before,I eat my breakfast with bread,milk and Cheese.
I study at Microcamp too I go there rarely, from three to four and a half.There I and my friends study inglês,with teacher Rafael,he is nice.
At Microcamp,I study in tuesdays and thursdays.
I return to home usually because I have things to do in downtown like dentist.
In the free time i like to play video-game,watch netflix,play soccer and play chess,it's me i hope do you like...
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It's close of Curitiba- It's close to Curitiba.
I study in two schools one if call Zardo and the other Microcamp- I study in two schools one it is called Zardo and the other it is called Microcamp.