Question

Guys my essay has some grammatical error or punctuation?

I am a huge fan of Flamengo. I've been to Maracanã stadium several times to watch my team playing, but the most amazing match I've ever been to was Flamengo against San Lorenzo, it was Flamengo's 2017 Libertadores first game.
The stadium was crowded and the fans made an awesome giant mosaic with the colors of Flamengo. The first half wasn't so good for both teams, but in the second half Flamengo made 4 goals and got the victory.
I will never forget this day. I hope one day i get the chance to experience something like that again.

Answer 1

I think instead of putting: "I hope one day I get the chance...." you can put: I hope one day I can have the chance..." in my opinion it's better to read.