Question

podem corrigir para mim? achem algum defeito
review 2 wizard w4

Answer 1

Oi, observei alguns errinhos, mas em geral você escreve e entende o inglês bem, continue estudando e você ficará ainda melhor.
Errinhos:
I study at Iracema School, (aqui você se perdeu um pouco, ficaria melhor dessa forma:) it is near to my house and because of that, I hate this horrible school. I entered in 2012 and knew a lot of people, but after that, I lost many friends.
The only thing that I want to do now is to study hard so I can pass the entrance exams, go to a college and leave my parents house.