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My favorite day of the week is Saturday
because i don't have to go to school or get up early.
I usually get up at 10:00 o'clock. Then I take a shower.
After that I get dressed, comb my hair, then i have breakfast.
I usually go to my father's house.
I sometimes have lunch with my father and my stepmother.
I really like my stepmother's food. It's delicious.
After lunch, I surf on the internet and read books.
In the evening,I usually eat out with my stepbrother and stepsister.
We often eat junk food or japonese foo.
I usually go to bed at about 1:30 am

Answer 1

No final você coloca * I usually Go to bed at 1:30 am, você tira o about...

E você esqueceu a letra D na frase * "junk good or japonese fooD"