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My family get-togheter is very cool, usually it is in my grandmother’s house on Sunday. We found there for lunch and each one takes a food. we talked a lot, we also tell jokes, stories, ate and we had a lot of fun. The adults are talking in the room, I usually hang out my cousins and we do several things, we talk about evertyhing as a school, friends, parties and we also whatch TV, play games. When I not with my cousins, I stay in the kitchen helping my grandmother. my favorite family reunion is when we go to the beach, we had a lot of fun, we woke up late, we stayed all day at the beach and almost always ate pizza. At night we always go to the square that has a amusement park and many food stalls and souvenirs, after we come back from the square we play volleyball on the beach until dawn, then the adults go to sleep and me and my cousins let's play truco. The Christmas reunion is also very fun, it's my favorite holiday, we get presents, we talk, we listen to songs, we remember the funny stories of the family and we always play secret santa.
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My family usually has a get-together at my grandmother's house on Sunday, and it's very cool. We meet there for lunch and each one takes a different food. We talk a lot, tell jokes, stories, eat and have a lot of fun. The adults talk in the room. I usually hang out with my cousins and we do several things: we talk about everything like school, friends, parties and also watch TV and play games. When I'm not with my cousins, I stay in the kitchen helping my grandmother.
My favorite family meeting is when we go to the beach, we have a lot of fun! We wake up late, stay all day at beach and often eat pizza. At night we always go to the square that has a amusement park and many food stalls and souvenirs. After, we come back from there and play volleyball at beach until dawn, then the adults go to sleep and me and my cousins go play Truco.
The Christmas meeting is also very fun, since it's my favorite holiday. We receive and give presents, we talk, listen to songs, remember the funny family's stories and always play secret santa.
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