Question

Por favor, preciso saber se tem algum erro gramatical ou de vocabulário nesse texto sobre celebridades e a importância na maneira como os adolescentes pensam sobre seus corpos.
Se alguém tiver alguma sugestão na melhoria do texto, tbm agradeço.
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Celebrities play an important role in the way teens think about their bodies because nowadays almost all young people want to look like celebrities and models. In my opinion, that is almost impossible because many celebrities don't show to their fans that they are real people with real problems like pimples and bad skin or bad hair days.
I still think that teenagers feel bad for not having their idol looks and this can cause many eating disorders like bulimia and anorexia.
I think that if the celebrities showed more of their imperfections, many teenagers would understand that it is normal to have some problems at the appearance and they would start to love themselves more and have more self-confidence.

Answer 1

tá tudo certo, só na última palavra que acho que seria “self steem”, mas não sei o que você queria dizer