Question

Gostaria de saber se meu texto em Inglês está correto?

I work on a company of sector to food. My job is in the importation sector. I make contact with suppliers and do to trading. I like my job because I have the opportunity to grow professionally every day. I prefer to work in this function, because I have contacts with other cultures. My job is more bureaucratic than others, because I have contact with sectors of Brazilian government. In my job, have contact with people of different nationality.

Answer 1

Você pode alterar apenas algumas concordâncias que estão erradas:

I work in a food sector company. My work is in the import sector. I make contact with suppliers and do trading. I like my job because I have the opportunity to grow professionally every day. I prefer to work in this role because I have contacts with other cultures. My work is more bureaucratic than others because I matenho contact with Brazilian government sectors. In my work, I have contact with people of different nationalities. 

Answer 2

De um modo geral sim, apenas deixo aqui algumas dicas...

Company of food industry...
..and I work with trading.
I love my job because...

I work with a variety of nationalities..