Question

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One of the things that worries people most nowadays is the way that they look. In the past few decades, fashion has been improving and even changing the way that people think about clothing. For that reason some people judge others just because they dress different.
First, we ought stop creating thoughts about a person that we have seen for the first time. Besides the most important thing in a person is the personality and beyond that we should never judge a book by its cover. So I do not believe that appearance is much important as personality.
Second, the price of clothes is surprising because there are some pieces of cloth that are ridiculous. And there are many people that buy it just to look rich or to impress other people instead of buying simple clothes for way cheaper.
In conclusion, I agree with it and I believe that if we do not care to much about our appearance it can make us fell better and more confident.

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