Question

Compus uma música em inglês, alguém que é fluente pode me dizer se tem algum erro de gramática?

when looking in the window
watching the birds fly
I feel a strange sensation
and hope in my eyes

are we really free?
I do not think
trapped in our chains
feeling like a lonely man

in the prison of my mind
have a feeling of emptiness
that prevents me from dreaming
but that doesn't stop me from fighting

are we really free?
I do not think
trapped in our chains
feeling like a lonely man

Answer 1

Resposta:

Hello!

When looking through the window

Troque apenas o "in" pelo through

SEE YOU!