Write a story with the title ‘A valuable discovery’. Use some of the words below and the plan for the paragraphs to help you. Write 80–100 words.
The moment that… / By the time … / When we … / just as… while … / before … / Afterwards … / Luckily … /Finally…
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A valuable discovery.
in the year 1456, Akemi was with his cousins Bela and Harumi, they were playing in the garden when Akemi tripped over a stone, the stone started to move and made a portal to another place, Akemi and her cousins entered the portal out of curiosity , they fell from a high place and there was a river there, the river was calm, without rocks in the bottom just like a cloud of cotton candy, the river was so soft. The moment they were there an elf was running desperately towards them, he hid in a thicket making a signal for the girls to go to him.
- What's going on? - Harumi asks desperately.
- Silence or they heard us, - said the rabbit, slowly catching his breath.
Suddenly two foxes passed in front of them accompanied by a woman wearing a crown. The woman was already gone, the girls and the rabbit came out of their hiding place.
- Who was she? - Bela asked. - What did she want?
- She was looking for me, but calm down is just a game of hide and seek - said the rabbit - Well ... my name is Mr. Cartola, who are you?
- I'm Akemi
- I am beautiful
- And I'm Harumi
- Nice to meet you, good if you'll excuse me, I need to go warm before, as you saw, I'm playing hide and seek.
After the rabbit left the girls started walking through the forest.
“When are we going home?” Asked Bella.
- I don't know, let's keep walking and see if we can find anything.- said Akemi,
"Okay," said the two Akemi cousins.
They continued to walk until they were in a village, knocked on the door of a house and there appeared a fairy, they were very happy with the luck they had.
- Hello, can you help us? - said Harumi- We are not of this world.
- Sorry I don't have all the ingredients, but luckily I know another spell. - Said the fairy.
- Thank you very much lady fairy.- Said Bela.
- You can call me Mika - said - well come in, wait for me in the room I will get the ingredients quickly - finished Mika.
The girls went to the room, which was all colorful and bright.
- When we get home, I will ask my mother to make cookies for us- said Akemi
"Stay here with girls," said Mika.
The moment the girls stayed in May, Mika said some magic words that looked more like another language. A portal opened and Akemi and her cousins returned home.
-Finally we arrived, I really liked this adventure - Said Bela.
- I like it too - said Harumi.
- I think we better keep it a secret- Akemi said, the others agreed.
End
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