Ola, tenho um texto para dazer de ingles em que tenho que escrever um email para um suposto amigo que mora em outro pais e vem passar as férias comigo, nele eu tenho que falar quando é para ele vir, oq podemos fazer e dar as dicas do que fazer...
Eu preciso de uma ajudinha na correção por favor, só para deixar claro que tem um texto base que esse suposto amigo me enviou e essa é a resposta dele
Texto:
Hello!
How are you?
Everything is going great and I'm very excited about your news, I can't wait for you to come. You know that you are a special Pearson in my life, certainly, that is the best new I have received from the last few months. For me it is better you come to my home on the first day of July and come back on the last day of your vacation because, in that way, we Will be able to enjoy all the things. I have already written a plan about our vacation and I think that will be very cool If we Ride a bike, go to the mall, go to the movie, visit different places and restaurants and we can go to Gramado too, It Will be a little cold and there we can rent a house and enjoy the tourist attractions, in short, we're going to have a lot of fun, what do you think about my plan? I didn’t Tell Everything to not spoil the surprise, but I can say for you that we will do a lot of o things.
Seriously, I'm very happy that you are coming, and I can't wait to see you. Since you went to live in the US, my life has never been the same.
Respostas
Resposta:
Hello!
How are you?
Everything is going great and I'm very excited about your news, I can't wait for you to come visit me. You know that you are, certainly, a special person in my life, this is the best new I have received from the last few months. For me it is better if you come to my house on the first July and go back on the last day of your vacation because, that way we will be able to enjoy all the things. I have already written a plan for our vacation and I think that will be very cool If we ride a bike, go to the mall, go to the movies, visit different places and restaurants and we can go to Gramado too. There is going to be a little cold so we can rent a house and enjoy the tourist attractions, in short, we're going to have a lot of fun, what do you think about my plan? I didn’t tell you everything becuase I don´t want to spoil the surprise, but I can tell you that we are going to have a lot of fun.
Seriously, I'm very happy that you are coming, and I can't wait to see you. Since you went to live in the US, my life has never been the same.
Explicação:
Gramaticalmente e ortografia já está corrigido, mudei algumas expressões porque não soavam muito bem.