Question

me ajudem a ver se meu texto de primeira pessoa em ingles esta correta o que tiver errado me corrija

hy my name is jonathan and y get up 5:30.
y brush my teeth and get dressed. then y walk to school with my brothers and a neighbor .at school ,y have breakfast of chocolate milk and sanduiche.
yt s time for luch.usualy,we have rice and beans with salad and meat.my friends and y meet up outside and ply football.yt is my favorite spot.y m a big fam of a team called the flamengo. y shower.andmy mom makes me fresh fruit juice from lemons .
then y watch cartoons befoore cloing my meath and writing homework an y make my bed,organize my clothes,go the market ,separe the garbage for recycling

Answer 1

eu em inglês é "i" e não "y" 

Answer 2

Tem mais erros, a maioria dele é de escrita, segue o texto corrigido:

Hi, my name is jonathan and I get up at 5:30.
I brush my teeth and get dressed, Then I walk to school with my brothers and a neighboor. I have breakfast of chocolate milk and sanduiche.
When it's time to lunch, usually we have rice and beans with salad and meat. My friends and I meet up outside and play football. That is my favorite sport. I'm a big fan of a team called Flamengo. I take a shower and my mom makes me fresh fruit juice from lemons.
So I watch animated series before "cloing my meath" (não sei o que quis dizer com isso) and I do homework, make my bed, organize my clothes, go to the market and finally separe the garbage for recycling.